Pyro

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Steno
Pyro
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Strike it, light it
Make it breath
Red, orange Yellow
colors reach
Wave mezmorizing
heat will teach
Out of control
the rules are breached
Pyromaniac
some say
Addicting flames
lead disarray
Bow down
ye fire slave
save tight a match
for another day
 
DonDi
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cute FX
Shad
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Now that's what I'm talkin' about *^_^*

P3n on fri3nds & f3r~git da rul3s
Sptfyr
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Great poem.  I really like the form, flow, and clip of the poem as well as the rhyme scheme.  Great 'flickering flame' image both the literal and figurative one.