Poetry to make you blush or puke (originally posted by Dondi)

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Poetry to make you blush or puke (originally posted by Dondi)

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DonDi

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Send Message Reply with this quote Reply to this Post Posted: Jan 24, 2008 2:54 AM
I wrote this by special request of a lady friend several years ago. I had to rewrite it about 10 times to get the language she wanted. Hope you like it as much as she did.
Title is MMHMM

I love to see you standing there,
In bra and panties too.
It raises feelings deep within,
I'll tell you I want you.
I'll pull you close and hug you tight,
I'll kiss you deep and long.
I'll cup your butt in my two hands,
And press you to my dong.
Your hand will travel ever down,
Until I make a gasp.
Because, my dear, it feels so good,
To be within your grasp.
The hooks will open on your bra,
Your bra will fall away.
My mouth will fasten on your breast,
I'll suck it while you sway.
I'll suck it deep within my mouth,
The nipple I will flick.
I'll give you pleasure with my tongue,
And you can stroke my dick.
Your panties then I'll peel away,
And lay you on the floor.
My tongue will taste your little clit,
And it will beg for more.
You'll scream and cry and plead and beg,
And say please give me more.
My tongue will drive you crazy, dear,
While lying on the floor.
My tongue will fuck your pussy deep,
Your juices will I suck.
Your screams are getting louder now,
As with my dick you're stuck.
It slides along the hot slick path,
And penetrates you deep.
Your body I am rocking now,
Though you could never sleep.
I drive it in and pull it out,
First slow and then real fast.
I work it so I don't cum quick,
I want to make it last.
You'll scream so loud, and then again,
Each louder than the first.
You'll tell me give you more and more,
Your pussy has a thirst.
The milky cream that from you flows,
Will run upon the floor.
The force of my dick pounding you,
Will push you to the door.
And then down deep, I'll feel it start,
A rumble in my soul.
And as you scream with me again,
I'll cum deep in your hole.
I'll fill you up til it runs out,
Til I can't cum again.
You'll tell me that I've been a place,
No one has ever been.
I'll hug you close and kiss you deep,
And then we'll go to sleep.
Right on the floor where we just loved,
Piled up in one big heap.
♪Po3tic Mi$tr3$$♫

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Send Message Reply with this quote Post a reply to this Topic Posted: Jan 24, 2008 8:40 AM
MMHMM is right *^_^*

What great fun this was, totally sexified
my friend <3 Delete Reply
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Send Message Reply with this quote Post a reply to this Topic Posted: Feb 4, 2008 3:50 PM
I hope you blushed, I would hate to have made you puke. Delete Reply
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Send Message Reply with this quote Post a reply to this Topic Posted: Feb 4, 2008 4:26 PM

DonDi wrote:
I hope you blushed, I would hate to have made you puke.

H*ll, I'm still blushin" *^_^(* Delete Reply
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Send Message Reply with this quote Post a reply to this Topic Posted: Feb 12, 2008 3:28 PM
Blush becomes you. Delete Reply
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Send Message Reply with this quote Post a reply to this Topic Posted: Feb 15, 2008 8:34 AM

DonDi wrote:
Blush becomes you.

Now i become blush. Everytime i re-read this poem of course! Delete Reply
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Send Message Reply with this quote Post a reply to this Topic Posted: Feb 16, 2008 4:02 PM
Ms Mary, what would your Mother say if she caught you reading such as this? Delete Reply
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Send Message Reply with this quote Post a reply to this Topic Posted: Feb 24, 2008 4:02 AM

DonDi wrote:
Ms Mary, what would your Mother say if she caught you reading such as this?

Silent treatment. Then after a few second's pause...She'll instantly get a heart attack! haha

(Anyway, Dondi...I am going to cut and save this precious poem. Hope you won't mind) Delete Reply
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Send Message Reply with this quote Post a reply to this Topic Posted: Feb 24, 2008 4:39 AM
If I minded, I wouldn't have posted it, and especially don't mind if you save it. Delete Reply
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Send Message Reply with this quote Post a reply to this Topic Posted: Feb 24, 2008 5:53 PM
LMAO, You two are CrAzY

Luvs ya both, Ciao Delete Reply
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Send Message Reply with this quote Post a reply to this Topic Posted: Feb 24, 2008 6:52 PM
OOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She speaks Italiano!!
Sexy language.
A redneck friend of mine taught me to say bye bye in Italiano.

A River Dirt Cheap. Delete Reply
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Send Message Reply with this quote Post a reply to this Topic Posted: Feb 25, 2008 3:41 PM

DonDi wrote:
I wrote this by special request of a lady friend several years ago. I had to rewrite it about 10 times to get the language she wanted. Hope you like it as much as she did.
Title is MMHMM

I love to see you standing there,
In bra and panties too.
It raises feelings deep within,
I'll tell you I want you.
I'll pull you close and hug you tight,
I'll kiss you deep and long.
I'll cup your butt in my two hands,
And press you to my dong.
Your hand will travel ever down,
Until I make a gasp.
Because, my dear, it feels so good,
To be within your grasp.
The hooks will open on your bra,
Your bra will fall away.
My mouth will fasten on your breast,
I'll suck it while you sway.
I'll suck it deep within my mouth,
The nipple I will flick.
I'll give you pleasure with my tongue,
And you can stroke my dick.
Your panties then I'll peel away,
And lay you on the floor.
My tongue will taste your little clit,
And it will beg for more.
You'll scream and cry and plead and beg,
And say please give me more.
My tongue will drive you crazy, dear,
While lying on the floor.
My tongue will fuck your pussy deep,
Your juices will I suck.
Your screams are getting louder now,
As with my dick you're stuck.
It slides along the hot slick path,
And penetrates you deep.
Your body I am rocking now,
Though you could never sleep.
I drive it in and pull it out,
First slow and then real fast.
I work it so I don't cum quick,
I want to make it last.
You'll scream so loud, and then again,
Each louder than the first.
You'll tell me give you more and more,
Your pussy has a thirst.
The milky cream that from you flows,
Will run upon the floor.
The force of my dick pounding you,
Will push you to the door.
And then down deep, I'll feel it start,
A rumble in my soul.
And as you scream with me again,
I'll cum deep in your hole.
I'll fill you up til it runs out,
Til I can't cum again.
You'll tell me that I've been a place,
No one has ever been.
I'll hug you close and kiss you deep,
And then we'll go to sleep.
Right on the floor where we just loved,
Piled up in one big heap.

This is great! It just seemed to flow out of you man.

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