A Life Once Abundantly Supplied

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Marguerite
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Laugh lines appear in a smile
Crinkled eyes open and beguile
A life once abundantly supplied
No longer found and occupied
 
Mind stunted by disenchantment
Body crumbling into parchment
Forfeited hopes and dreams
Heart hardened and forever seamed
 
Scent of decay alive in despair
Death envelops fetid air
Lost vitality and spirit dwell
Inside the desolate hollowed shell
Shad
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Such a fitting title!!!!!!!!


You have managed to fit so much so tightly bound my friend


Umm, this'n got me on a roll, loved the topic and the inspiration, brilliant work here Marguerite 
P3n on fri3nds & f3r~git da rul3s
Marguerite
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Thank you Shad.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I'm going through some tough times.  Poetry is such a wonderful outlet for emotions - don't you think?  What do people do that do not write?  I guess, they probably explode or implode - lol.  Take care.  M.
Steno
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Man, there's a lot of good writers here uh? Interesting work here, nice job.
DonDi62
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A smile is found among sadness.  I like this concept.
Marguerite
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Thank you for your kind words.
Marguerite
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Thank you DonDi.
sptfyr
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Wow, Marguerite, this is darker than your usual, but I really like it.  You've really captured the more unappealing side to aging.  Just the thought of withering away is a bit chilling.  Your poem is also beautifully written and flows right off the tongue.  Wonderful piece.
Marguerite
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Thank you Sptfyr.