"i wish"

[The Dark Prince]

I keep our secret within reach inside,
grasping without reaching anything.
I've been alone, always searching for the truth,
and it seems I've not slept in a week.

The foggy autumn air enshrouds everything,
eternal rain that seems to draw away my soul.
Together forever, forever, together,
a vision from one of my dreams.

My scars are permanent, with my tortured soul,
I have no one else to blame, its all on myself.
Cursed by the cursed and damned by the damned,
unwanted in heaven, so i now rule forever in hell.

Be strong, your wait has beeen so long,
do you not have the time to take what you give?
Don't we all dream of dying, or when,
I will show you where the dreams always reign.

Living dead a way of life, everything else is a lie,
Your life clock is ticking, i hear it..tick, tick, tick.
My wings made of brimstone, will carry you to life,
Mesmerized we try to find, answers we hide deep inside.

[gary bechter]

enjoyed the read___
the last two lines of the 5th stanza are sweet.

G.

[The Dark Prince]

Thanks for the kind words.  I am still posting on yahoo, but getting sicker and sicker of it.

Steve
The Dark Prince

[Shad]

Wow DP, Are we doing the "dark passion" now my friend?

Awesome job, flawless in structure and rhythm, Very well done

[The Dark Prince]

Shad,

i am a new man.  I have but one goal in life.  To be the best new poet on the face of the planet and I will not stop until I achieve this.  I am totally clean from drugs and am writing inceredibly deeply layered dark poems.  Some don't understand....but soon all will.  I owe alot to you for sticking with me and I appreciate your consstant support.  if you don't mind me askling...what's the deal with you and greeneyedevil?

Steve

[Shad]

LOL

Steve, I'm so very glad for you my friend, you sound wonderful hon <3


Hmmm, GreenEyes eh?

I've seen her around last year off and on during my days of being suspended numerous times LOL She would never comment my work but, would bash the hell outta everyone she came across, I even threw a few out there knowing she was on line but, she never bit, I was curious as to what she might think of my work...Well, this last time I was suspended, I was gone for a while and when I finally had gotten back on, I'd forgotten all about her (not that we ever really communicated or anything)

Well, I had answered someones question asking "Is this good?"

My reply to it was basically...

"Well done kiddo,
loved the rhyme and meta in this piece,
you're going places,
All the Very Best, Shad <3"

GreenEyes answered right under me but, then, decided to drag my name into her snide comment "about" the way I answered..

It was something like this...

"Yes, it is good and to the poster above me, all she asked was "is it good?" are you even going to answer the question?"

To which I replied...

"I believe I did answer the question GED and just because I did not exactly say the words "YES IT IS GOOD" doesn't mean that my comment didn't say it in another way, Grow up eh?"

To which she answered back a bunch of crap on how "big" my head is and how mouthy I am and so on...

Well, I am a lover, not a fighter so, I called her out (not really apologizing in the least) but, to say that "she" was the one jumping me first and that if she thought I was just going to stand by and have her dump on me, she was clearly mistaken...

Her reply to that was even shard but ,we're added to each other 9for the sake of the Minion) and haven't communicated since...

Oh well....LOL

[Steno]

Ya man, I could see this, you lay out a nice vision.